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Postby jordan96 » Thu Oct 26, 2017 9:26 pm

Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly. :eek:

So far I have.

-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)

P.s I did just shoot a DAP with Ana Deville last week that I am editing right now.

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Postby dpconnoisseur1 » Thu Oct 26, 2017 9:53 pm

I think if you concentrate on intense:
    Gape
    Anal
    DP
    DAP
    DPP
    TP
    TAP
you will get most of LP core audience excited about something on the above list especially the ones that prefer seeing American models. I think concentrating on multiple penetration will give desperate American hardcore fans some unique content to consume. There is tons of Anal sites in the Adult industry but no exclusive multiple penetration sites (DP, DAP, DPP, TP). That markets needs to be finally tapped, LP proved there were willing customers that would pay a premium for it but it was mostly Euro women driven. Bringing that same intensity, camerawork and multiple penetration content with American models seems like a sure bet. So far in the American industry multiple penetration is treated like the icing on the cake instead of the cake like LP has demonstrated successfully. My two cents! :cool:

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Postby hjohjole » Thu Oct 26, 2017 10:23 pm

Hello, welcome to the forum and welcome to LP.

I was going to wait for another scene or two before giving an assessment. But to be honest, unlike many others here, i actually think this looks promising. From what i could see in the trailer this scene has some manhandling, rough oral and a good amount of ATM. All the things that i really like.
But i do have a big problem with the scene and the reason i did not buy it is that the trailer shows a very large amount of vaginal sex. I am obsessed with anal and i usually just skip over any vaginal part while watching porn. For me vaginal sex is just annoying and kills the mood.
I don't really hate the concept of having a dedicated oral girl like Janice in this scene. But then it is very important that the girl does ONLY oral. Pussy needs to be left alone, no play, no toys and especially no fucking.

I don't necessarily need to see a DAP gangbang to be satisfied and unlike mr dpconnoisseur here i am not at all a fan of DP. If this had only been an all anal scene i would probably have bought it.

Looking forward to seeing the Anna Deville scene (im a big fan of hers) and any future releases.

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Postby Falcon131721 » Fri Oct 27, 2017 1:31 am

I would focus on sexy heels large deep buttplugs right from opening of scene and hard anal with balls deep deepthroat cum in their ass and make them swallow.

I am moving away from liking dp dap and tap. I like just the good hard deep anal.
The ass should never be unoccupied.

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Postby pastaga » Fri Oct 27, 2017 1:53 am

First scene isn't that bad, but all the girls on LP have to perform at least anal. and if possible with a more "impressive" male talent than Chris. Otherwise the scene was good and refreshing on LP.

Talents speaking, I'd love to see :
Arya Fae
Ryan Riesling
Chloe Carter
Lydia Black
Andy Rye...

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Postby magizi877 » Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:15 am

jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly. :eek:

So far I have.

-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)

P.s I did just shoot a DAP with Ana Deville last week that I am editing right now.


Hello Jordan.
I didn't get to watch your first movie because I typically skip scenes where there are 2 or more women.
I prefer scenes where there is just one woman and any number of men, be it 1 or 15 men,
I prefer when she is getting ALL the attention, including the camera work, of course.
Also worth mentioning is that according to this poll, 68% of LP users prefer gangbang scenes.

For me, LP means two things, beautiful models and balls deep anal. Everything else is just sugar coating IMO.
If you can consistently combine these two things with good camera work, you'll probably be very successful.

A director of LP once asked me, what does "balls deep" mean, so just to make sure you understand, this is it:

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This is a funny example of the visceral feeling we want. heh!

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Also, please include "interracial" in your list.

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Postby drevokocur66 » Fri Oct 27, 2017 5:59 am

jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly. :eek:

So far I have.

-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)


Fisting, PMAO style wet content, girls having orgasm when fucked in the ass, squirting when they do is fantastic (for those that can do it.) Large male talent, no one wants to see a small dick anal scene. And of course balls deep anal pounding. Please avoid the tip fucking.
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Postby Chi_Cha » Fri Oct 27, 2017 7:33 pm

You have to shoot like if the girls were posing to the camera, just watch few of the latest giorgio vids to get the basics of gonzo, when girls posing for photoshoot they are sexy & feminin at their finest, lingerie, high heels, jewelry, haircut & make up i.e. that's what differentiate quality and professional porn to amateur, focus of LP is not amateur porn there are other porn site for that content type :) but that not enough, girl has to look slutty & nasty in front of the camera of course !
Making girls shooting with small socks like that is not sexy, , i will say it's even a turn off, It's not like Abella can't be sexy, she can be very sexy when well prepared ! Image , oh and the couch position has to face, or be on side compared to the window to make enter more light. If you manage to shoot legalporno style with US girls it will be 100% successful because the only thing missing to LP is casting great US girls and so far they had to wait them to do a porn trip in europe to shoot, i don't know if it will be possible because US girls cost more money and even more when performing more hardcore acts, futur will tell :D

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Postby jordan96 » Fri Oct 27, 2017 8:50 pm

All Great feedback so far, thanks!

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Postby Ass2Die4464 » Fri Oct 27, 2017 11:45 pm

I echo many opinions above with showing the girls off before the sex starts. After all why have beautiful girls appear in your studio if your not going to let them look their best an tease or entice viewers before the sex.
dpconnoisseur1 wrote:I think concentrating on multiple penetration will give desperate American hardcore fans some unique content to consume. There is tons of Anal sites in the Adult industry but no exclusive multiple penetration sites (DP, DAP, DPP, TP). That markets needs to be finally tapped, LP proved there were willing customers that would pay a premium for it but it was mostly Euro women driven. Bringing that same intensity, camerawork and multiple penetration content with American models seems like a sure bet.

+1,000,000

IMHO, focusing on scenes with only one girl per scene is where the gonzo money really is found. Also add 5 minute or less of cheesy stories to your scenes which can be added now with reduction in language barriers while showing off the model. No dildo warm-up instead use the men or man before other men join for warm-up. Finally NO or at least keep to minimum any prolapse or piss scenes. Female squirting is fine but one female or man water boarding another person is not sexy or erotic just flat out gross like prolapse a circus act.
I also look forward to that Anna scene she is a LP American import favorite so it will be a good gauge of your shooting style contrasted to veteran LP directors that have already shot her.

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Postby Dudemeister » Sat Oct 28, 2017 9:49 am

Hi Jordan,

I'd say:

- focus on the girl as a porn star, try to avoid the "girl next door look", we have way too much of this on LP already
- make them wear sexy clothes and make up
- focus on lingerie and high heels and don't remove them during the scene
- please avoid too many close-ups, let us see her whole body
- show her facial expression during the fucking
- dirty talk whould be highly appreciated as there's no problem with the language shooting American girls

Btw, your first scene is pretty great in terms of content. I mean, anal, squirting, slapping, hair pulling, deepthroat, girl rimming guy, cock sniffing, ATOGM... whoa! Keep that coming!
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Postby kidloco2 » Sat Oct 28, 2017 1:26 pm

Hi Jordan,

welcome to the forum. I really appreciate your interest. Yeah, sometimes critic posts may sound harsh here, but please don't take it personal, this is normal here and 99% time it's meant in a good way. People posting here are very passionate about their best anal porn site :) .

Bellow I summed it up for the beginning of your work , it may look like many points, but if you get used to it during further shooting it would be very easy.
I dare to say, people posting here suggestions and constructive critic help to make far better scenes and the most exciting anal porn if producers or directors would listen. :cool:

So far:

- camera is very busy (not steady, shaky), smoother movement is desired

- lack of more direct frontal (en face) shots, especially during middle / closeup shots (ie pussy/ass licking, penetration, gape), btw. side or diagonal view is a cancer these days

- don't keep one type of a shot during one take, cut in between some close ups or extreme close ups or move the camera for a closeup and back to middle, wider shot (it's actually so so, but needs improvement)

- keep in one shot (preferably middle close up with girl's face in the shot as well) the beginning or ending of a particular penetration or position (thus we can see dick going in or out)

- more ass play especially during solo/lesbo intro, like butt cheeks massaging, ass fingering, anal toys (butt plugs, anal dildos), asshole finger stretching

- anal not intense enough

- more DP and especially DAP!

- more wide gaping

- squirting is not necessary in every scene but when possible very welcome!

- longer endings with swallowing and anal creampies

- more rimjobs (guy and girl)

- shoot like if the girls were posing to the camera

- girls are the center of everything, avoid to stick guy's ass, legs, arms, whatever other than dick in from of the camera

Finally I use graphical depicting suggestion from one my older posts
LP wrong versus proper shots cutsheet.jpg

cam_position_01.jpg
My favs - Florane Russell, Kristy Black, Kattie Gold, Linda Sweet, Charlotte Sartre, Chelsey Sun, Lady Bug, Rebecca Sharon, Eloa Lombard, Amina Danger

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Postby Gagandrim » Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:18 am

Hi Jordan. I enjoyed the f>m rimming in this scene and would love to see more of it. Some rough deepthroating would also be great. Thank you.

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Postby jeffandersonn » Sun Oct 29, 2017 4:08 pm

work on the content:

- shoot dp/dap/dpp/IR DAP only
- DO NOT HIRE lame male talents, DO NOT HIRE markus dupreè, mr pete, ramon, ribas, john strong etc, only guys with big dicks, a good erection and a decent popshot. plenty of new black male talents, try to book them, macana man, james jaggers, john johnson, alex johnes etc
- do not end the scene 10 seconds after the popshots
- bring back the swallow. stop shooting the fake swallow american market is producing right now. plenty of girls faking swallow or wasting it all just before the final gulp. Massive swallow like a good source of iron, no cum dodging allowed and cum coat my throat. don not let the girls swallow the loads one by one.
- Tell male talents to not cover girls ass, or pussy with their ugly hands!
-Stop shooting all the scenes in the white couch scenario. please stop it! plenty of mega villas in the USA, try to shoot a scene in the pool, in the garden, in a gym, in an abandoned hangar or factory like annette schwars is a slutwoman 2

camera issue:

- Stop shooting the entire scene in side view, it's a fucking cancer. PUt the camera in front of the penetration too!
- Stop rotating the camera for no reason, noone wants to watch the scene at 45°. keep a straight horizon!
- DO NOT move the camera every 5 seconds, call every positions and when you find the right angles lock the camera in that positions for at least 40-50 seconds. Tell male talents how to fuck, how you want them to fuck, new generations of male talents don't know how to help the camera guys. they fuck all in the same way generating a lots of blind side for the camera.
- Shoot dps/ daps in 5-6 positions at least. Bring back close ups, and tunnel view in cowgirls and reverse. paid attention to the lights and the focus of your camera.
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-keep the girls in the centre of the screen
- DO NOT, and i say it again do not shoot guys face just before the popshot or after.

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my last request. find a way to shoot Juelz Ventura in a real IR gangbang with anal dp /dap and a massive swallow finale. she is been requesting to star in this kind of scenes from ages. And she is a true pro in real hardcore sex.

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Postby gapefan » Sun Oct 29, 2017 6:59 pm

^Camera angles that obscure the models face are worthless :rolleyes:

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Postby kidloco2 » Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:10 pm

jeffandersonn wrote:work on the content
- shoot dp/dap/dpp/IR DAP only
- do not end the scene 10 seconds after the popshots
- bring back the swallow
- Stop shooting the entire scene in side view, it's a fucking cancer. PUt the camera in front of the penetration too!
- Stop rotating the camera for no reason, noone wants to watch the scene at 45°. keep a straight horizon!
- DO NOT move the camera every 5 seconds, call every positions and when you find the right angles lock the camera in that positions for at least 40-50 seconds. Tell male talents how to fuck, how you want them to fuck, new generations of male talents don't know how to help the camera guys. they fuck all in the same way generating a lots of blind side for the camera
- Bring back close ups, and tunnel view in cowgirls and reverse. paid attention to the lights and the focus of your camera
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Postby RedBaron » Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:08 pm

The reason why i did not buy your first scene is that the girls had bushes.
If you want to sell scenes you should face the taste of LP-members:
viewtopic.php?f=96&t=16391
85% do not want girls with bushes. Most of them want bald shaved pussies.
I know it is hard to find shaved girls in the US today but i think you must try.

The best of the best would be if you can convince Adriana Chechik to shave her pussy again. Like at the begining of her career. :D :D :D
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Postby jeffandersonn » Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:58 pm

gapefan wrote:^Camera angles that obscure the models face are worthless :rolleyes:



i'm talking about 40-50 seconds. you know close ups, don't need to watch girls' face during the whole scene.

don't be a nazi with other people tastes....i never asked to not shoot certain angles, the more people happier the better.
please read again what i wrote.

peace :)

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Postby gapefan » Sun Oct 29, 2017 11:17 pm

I'm not being a nazi! That's a ridiculous claim! :)

I'm expressing my honest opinion, which is the purpose of a public forum ;)

I stand by my original statement :cool:

Camera angles that obscure the models face are worthless! :rolleyes:

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Postby jordan96 » Mon Oct 30, 2017 8:25 pm

kidloco2 wrote:Hi Jordan,

welcome to the forum. I really appreciate your interest. Yeah, sometimes critic posts may sound harsh here, but please don't take it personal, this is normal here and 99% time it's meant in a good way. People posting here are very passionate about their best anal porn site :) .

Bellow I summed it up for the beginning of your work , it may look like many points, but if you get used to it during further shooting it would be very easy.
I dare to say, people posting here suggestions and constructive critic help to make far better scenes and the most exciting anal porn if producers or directors would listen. :cool:

So far:

- camera is very busy (not steady, shaky), smoother movement is desired

- lack of more direct frontal (en face) shots, especially during middle / closeup shots (ie pussy/ass licking, penetration, gape), btw. side or diagonal view is a cancer these days

- don't keep one type of a shot during one take, cut in between some close ups or extreme close ups or move the camera for a closeup and back to middle, wider shot (it's actually so so, but needs improvement)

- keep in one shot (preferably middle close up with girl's face in the shot as well) the beginning or ending of a particular penetration or position (thus we can see dick going in or out)

- more ass play especially during solo/lesbo intro, like butt cheeks massaging, ass fingering, anal toys (butt plugs, anal dildos), asshole finger stretching

- anal not intense enough

- more DP and especially DAP!

- more wide gaping

- squirting is not necessary in every scene but when possible very welcome!

- longer endings with swallowing and anal creampies

- more rimjobs (guy and girl)

- shoot like if the girls were posing to the camera

- girls are the center of everything, avoid to stick guy's ass, legs, arms, whatever other than dick in from of the camera

Finally I use graphical depicting suggestion from one my older posts
LP wrong versus proper shots cutsheet.jpg

cam_position_01.jpg



I actually printed this image, it's great! ;)

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Postby jordan96 » Mon Oct 30, 2017 8:28 pm

RedBaron wrote:The reason why i did not buy your first scene is that the girls had bushes.
If you want to sell scenes you should face the taste of LP-members:

85% do not want girls with bushes. Most of them want bald shaved pussies.
I know it is hard to find shaved girls in the US today but i think you must try.

The best of the best would be if you can convince Adriana Chechik to shave her pussy again. Like at the begining of her career. :D :D :D


Good feedback, did not know that. This forum is a lot to take in, but thanks for getting me caught up on the preferences.

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Postby CanadianCouple » Mon Oct 30, 2017 9:09 pm

jordan96 wrote: First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives.


LP forum is pretty much the most negative and complaining forum on the net, so don't let it get you down. If you make a scene where the girl does DAP, someone will pull out a stopwatch and bitch it wasn;t long enough. If you have the girls wear heels, someone will bitch they hate it. So, try to listen to feedback if you get the same thing from multiple people. If you cater to one person's feedback only, you will upset someone else
.

In saying that, I thought this was a Chris Strokes thing, so thanks for clarifying. I like him as talent by the way.

Most (not all) of us here, are with LP because of the DAP content so if you can have some of that regularly you will do well. However, there are feedbacks that show there are quite a few people who would like non DAP content so the variety will be good. Getting in the US based stars is great (abella danger is a good start, she is top tier as you know).

Thanks for being interactive and willing to work with the people buying your product. Just play to the majority and don't let one or two people shitting on you get you down :)

Cheers

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Postby Ass2Die4464 » Mon Oct 30, 2017 11:39 pm

My advice is shoot what you enjoy shooting and what makes you an acceptable profit margin. All you are getting from this thread is members suggesting what they prefer to see.

The game changer here is the access to all the American talent pool since many girls were probably nervous about traveling to Europe not knowing what to expect. My observation is that many LP members are desensitized from porn and need more extreme content to excite them. I really believe it doesn't matter what the model looks like to them as long as she does DAP without complaining, prolapses and enjoy being used as a human urinal. I even starting to believe gender doesn't matter.

Here are my suggestion of what I prefer to see: beautiful girls shown engaged in the sex, a focus on one model in the scene, *** camera angles centered on the models face and action *** I think your choice of shooting style will be the most important asset on LP, girl next door and sexy outfits and an extremely short plot line to rationalize outfit choice during the intro.

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Postby jeffandersonn » Tue Oct 31, 2017 12:05 am

Jordan has 0% of chance to make profit Here if he tries to sell the same crap B/G american porn scene.
there is a big difference between this forum and others. Here users are customers who spend money and buy scenes.
Better to hear criticism, even if it's too harsh.

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Postby kidloco2 » Tue Oct 31, 2017 12:21 am

jordan96 wrote:I actually printed this image, it's great! ;)


Thank you, you're welcome ;)
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Postby lesserfirefox » Tue Oct 31, 2017 11:04 am

For me the easiest way to understand the common tastes of legalporno.com users is to see the 2 top selling scenes of this site, so you can have a specific idea of what you need to shot to maximaze sales.
I mean: -Monster of dap with Angel Smalls and -8on2 Belle Factor.
Both scenes have hard airtight interracial dap and great camera angles.

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Postby gapefan » Fri Nov 03, 2017 1:44 pm

If you can include these amazing DAP positions, it will make for some incredible scenes! :cool:

These are my favorite 5 :D

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Cowgirl DAP


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Reverse Cowgirl DAP


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Riding Astride DAP (my most favorite!)


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Reverse Riding Astride DAP


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Crossed Spoon DAP
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Postby staygold » Fri Nov 03, 2017 2:25 pm

DAP is overly overpromoted lately, guess affiliates and promoters are at least get paid well for hyping this up :cool: Tbh for this studio the last thing to fix is adding dap. Ok here goes what to improve:

1) Male talent. Find new 20-25 year old guys somewhere or at least new amateur looking males under 30. Key word is new. No more of this old infertile steroid garbage like chris please. A premature ejaculation looks better than a pumped up has-been granddad demonstating his viagra overdose.

*** You can introduce something like casting where hot girls test random male talent and give scores to them.

2) Use black couch / darker background like in Anna de Ville scene screenshot.

*** In general be diffrent and stick to Sineplex juicy color palette if you can. There are already 5 other studios that shoot identical sterile white garbage we don't need another one (you).

3) No sterile crap. Make it nasty. It's a pleasure to see male pubes in Anna de Ville scene, add more things like it. Gape juice. Also no video cuts or post production please.

4) Do DP or whatever anal balls deep only. If dap can't be balls-deep than don't do it at all.

5) Add genuine prone bone like https://www.legalporno.com/watch/32767/ ... _dp_sz1787 (see 00:37-00:39 note how it is shot and shoot like this).

6) About lots of guys / lots of girls this is bullshit. Random steroid faggots standing in the background jerking their numb sticks are always totally out of the picure. The same goes to girls. Focus on intensity and chemistry between performers instead.

When there are more trailers and scenes out there will be probably more feedback ;)

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Postby buttguy » Sat Nov 04, 2017 6:05 pm

jordan96 wrote:Ok Guys, My name is Jordan I am the producer/director of the Assablanca Movies (not Chris Strokes, he was just talent) I've been reading all your feedback in all the threads. First I gotta say, you guys are more harsh than my last 3 ex wives. But I am a firm believer in constructive criticism and I want to shoot stuff that you guys will also enjoy. So give me the good, bad and ugly. :eek:

So far I have.

-Anal not intense enough
-More Double Anal
-More DP
-Gaping
-Squirting
-butt plugs
-swallowing
-anal creampies
-More Rimjobs (guy and girl)
-No Cheesey Story Lines
-Spitting
-lots of guys / lots of girls (difficult with US costs of talent compared to euro)

P.s I did just shoot a DAP with Ana Deville last week that I am editing right now.



Great first scene. Only thing I would like to see would be more Pronebone Anal. Love the camera quality and lighting you use. Think that it would look hot riding a hot butt like Abella's while she is on her stomach!! :cool:

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Postby gongobyte » Mon Nov 06, 2017 9:58 am

My personal opinion

Positives:
*good color and lighting - the girls looked sexy and tanned, blemishes did not stick out too much. Much better than the colorless or badly tinted video many other LP studios are making.
*chris strokes - while not the most exciting ever, is still far better than most of the guys LP uses. Though I think he is more suited to slow scenes with deep slow anal rather than "intense" anal scenes. So prob not quite perfect choice for this type.
*good variety of positions and a camera focus on the girls, rather than the male talent or wasting 3/4 of the frame on walls/furniture.

Negatives:
*only the less attractive girl did anal, this really ruined the scene for me. Should be the other away round so as not to create disappointment for anal fans.
*camera lens warping - at some points body parts at the edge of the screen were unnaturally warped and stretched, looks weird as.
*male talent - early days yet - but upcoming preview pics show some incredibly bad and boring old male talent

Requests:
*Keep the color in the video and don't shoot with the camera facing directly to a window glowing white with overpowering sunlight or godrays.
*Some hot latino/south American type girls doing anal. There are many hot thin latinos on US sites, but none with anal.
*A range of young male talent, other LP studios currently show the same three/four old guys in every scene and they even sometimes share them between studios. Not a single LP studio has a strong male performer in early 20's. Need some guys with large straight and rock hard tight cocks for good long penetration, too many guys with wrinkly, lumpy or bendy cocks or phimosis in current porn industry. Need guys that do great penetration - built like Adriano or Mike Chapman - but in their 20's.
*Better cream pies. The few creampies in current LP are horrible. It cuts to the cumshot without any build up and looks fake with no pleasure, they also only stick the tip in. Need long deep cumshots with the guy genuinely orgasming in the girls ass and a close up on the penetration (not too close though) to show the genuine pleasure the guys/girls get from orgasm in the ass.

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Postby CanadianCouple » Tue Nov 07, 2017 11:01 am

Just get me a Romi Rain DAP scene and you have a customer for life :P

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Postby dap-addict » Wed Nov 08, 2017 9:55 pm

Hi Jordan, generally we just say here what we really think and we are used to quite envelope pushing hardcore porn.
I recently claimed a girl not able to perform DAP had no chance at LP in Prague. There are exceptions like Gina Gerson of course, but basically thats the drive here. You also see it checking the overall top sellers list and the monthly top sellers.

This said, as you are US based we should wanna use this to the best of all LP.
And so far in Prague there is:
- a lack of exotic models, especially latina, asian, ebony
- a lack of real big selling World Porn superstars like some of the already mentioned US girls
- a lack of rising stars with an already decent social media fellowing
- a lack of alt models like Charlotte Sartre
- a lack of dirty talk

Here you sure can gain points!

At the same time you can't sell the usual vanilla and step by step approach at LP; you may also indeed have problems to sell bush down there really, though LP users are quite tolerant in this aspect towards US girls. About the white sofa and white room I wouldn't think too much, but lighting in general has to be clear and gapes lit fine.

You have a great opportunity to play in some good profit thanks to LP and also to change that stagnant US market a bit by introducing European DAP standards - I really wish you luck! :)
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Postby prophetman13 » Tue Nov 14, 2017 10:15 pm

Not really feedback as much as an interesting scene idea:


Premise: most of the people who watch legal porno are experienced porn watchers - the site caters to the hardcore fan who love seeing the penetration closeup. Fans are likely 99% male who watch a lot of porn and masturbate a lot.

Idea: instead of having the girl talk exclusively to the male talent - she could break the fourth wall and engage with the viewers at home. Encourage the guys to masturbate, jerk off etc. ask us how much we want to be there instead of at home, etc. the idea would be to mix some jerk off encouragement into the scene.

Please let us know what you think of the idea. Could be interesting. This could be a niche you develop given you are shooting US girls and other studios won’t be able to copy.

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Postby twistedvincent » Wed Nov 15, 2017 7:39 pm

I will NOT have ANYTHING to do with these if you continue to feature has been pure garbage like John Strong.

Fucking HORRIBLE!!!
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Postby twistedvincent » Wed Nov 15, 2017 8:00 pm

OK, let me clarify. My biggest complaint by fa with LP scenes is there are ZERO good shooters and facials.

If you don't believe just take a look. I would be willing to bet out of the last 50 gonzo scenes maybe ONE featured a decent facial. Guys like Strong are pretty horrible in that respect as well.

So I have to ask, can't you find ANYBODY other than the same used up guys for EVERY scene in the world?
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Postby staygold » Wed Nov 15, 2017 8:37 pm

Agree with Vince here.

Strong and Holmes lol I thought they died long ago. Their lifeless plastic dicks are pathetic. 30-years-old is maximum age for a male performer.

Also I suggest you stop with the fake jlube saliva this is bullsht.

All in all, <url removed> 's pinned buttplug video is better than the garbage you produced.

2/10 There's a whole lot to improve.

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Postby CanadianCouple » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:16 pm

you guys are assholes.

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Postby jordan96 » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:40 pm

CanadianCouple wrote:you guys are assholes.


haha, yeah slightly harsh but always anticipated around here.

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Postby jordan96 » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:43 pm

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I would love to hear your recommendations on Studs in United States that will do DAP, that have big dicks and are not older and give monster facials.

I'll wait.

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Postby staygold » Thu Nov 16, 2017 12:28 am

Thanks for the reply. Well, off the top of my head

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Max Felicitas who works for Rocco
Mookie Jordan from dogfart

I also suggest you search on adt there might be someone else..

Big problem is, in the US they have these younger guys always shooting with ugly botox grannies so people barely watch this. So for example if you manage to film Jordi and el Caballo Loco with Anna deVille or Aidra Fox that would be top notch.

Plan B is pro-amateur guys which they have at gloryhole sites, manyvid and c4s stores. So it would be nice to start training your own small crew right now and adjust them to your requirements.

jordan96 wrote: do DAP, that have big dicks and are not older and give monster facials


Dap is overused. Seriously. I do recommend you also explore other kink (slow sensual blowjob or deepthroat, ass licking, bukkake, cosplay, cumswap, enema, joi etc) if possible to be at least a bit different from other identical studios.

jordan96 wrote:monster facials


There is a wiki how article which helps with what you call monster facials. I have it on good authority this works. Just don't use fake cum please.

Btw I saw no cumshot in Anna's trailer but I guess it was either tiny or totally fake. Guys like Holmes or Strong are too old they cannot produce more than a few drops of semen..

On a positive note, back to Anna De Ville AB002 scene:

+ I like the black couch and dark background. There is still oversaturation at times but in general it looks miles better than white-on-white crap from other studios. Keep mastering the hues and make the colors more juicy.
+ Random funny things like the buttplug thing, deepthroat and some rimming. Too bad deepthroat/rimming action is too fast like always in the US. Would be amazing to have them perform it slowly and sensually and spice it up with some dirty talk or random comments from the model.

So again, 2/10. However, there is an amazing opportunity to improve ;)

Good luck and please keep us posted!

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